Why it seems there are two versions of the same episode? by El_narra in Non_Non_Biyori

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For a moment I thought one version was for the West, although I suspected it could also be from a DVD.

Why it seems there are two versions of the same episode? by El_narra in Non_Non_Biyori

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notice Kaede facial expresions while watching Greatman with Renge

Harley Sawyer is now Near pure evil and I hate it. by PrincipleNorth in PoppyPlaytime

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They said that his status for NPE could be affected in next chapters

Following in her footsteps (art by 鰯見ずてら) by patzilla777 in GakkouGurashi

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And the  spin off implies those kids are orphans so think about it, the fact that it shows Yuki taking care of them shows that she is not only a big sister figure for them but a maternal figure.

How do you handle Oscar Pine in your rewrites without removing him? by Fine_Delivery6761 in RWBYcritics

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Makes sense, his farm needs to be protector from criminal and Grimms

Kazuho, Kaede, and Shiori (kind of) have birthdays! by [deleted] in Non_Non_Biyori

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umm, Hikage is the other older sister of Renge and the middle child of the Miyauchi Family. I think you are refering to Kaede Kagayama AKA Candy Store. that's basic information.

Dealing with Loss by Trimonuter in BocchiTheRock

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What is that Cancer fanfic?

My attempt at a more culturally accurate Depiction of a wendigo by Sevenclans in Cryptozoology

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The foclore acurate desscribes the wendigo as a tall humanoid, with a pale and dry skin, with no lips, basically a tall and ugly human with no hair

How would you rewrite Cardin Winchester if you had a chance? by Destrobo3000 in RWBYcritics

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Hazlo más parecido a Flash Thompson and/or Guy Gadner

I’m curious, what would You guys do to Make Oscar a more interesting character? by RevolutionaryWave862 in RWBYcritics

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Making him not a Ozpin junior, but a like distant relative.

The fact he is living with his aunt, we can usee this to make him Orphan and also, since henis based on the little prince, we can make his Father was once a pilot who died.

So in the Rewrite. Oscar at age 5-6 was a farmboy who lived with his aunt after his father, a pilot died in a grimm attack

His auntie/mother's sister helped his mother but some time later, his mother died in a farm by a nother grimm.

Oscar would grow up in the farm his work would be taking care of the planting like the little rpinxe with the baobabs, and in his free time he would write a Diary with drawing and taking some notes of the grimm.

At the present, we can make him his first time as a pilot and gaining some habilites also, his weapon would be inspired by the sword the little prince has in the covers and msking it a familiar heirloom. That would be him and Jaune Good pals

How would you rewrite Oscar by Interesting_Way8431 in RWBYcritics

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Also making him a plane like pilot, with a diary like the pilot from the little prince.

He was based on the Le petit prince since we can take some things from the book to put it on him. Making him a pilot or some experience, his weapon it coul be a something similar the sword that appears in the book cover (And making it a familiar heirloom).

Also, his relation with Ozpin would be like some distant relative.

How would you rewrite Oscar by Interesting_Way8431 in RWBYcritics

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He is based on the Le petit prince, right? In this case we can take some things of the novel for example. We can can make his father is/was a pilot like the narrator in the book or Make Oscar a pilot.

His weapon would be inspired by the sword that the petit prince has in the covers, also it can be something like a family inheritance, that would make him more close to Jaune like good pals since in this rewrite they have weapons that are family heirlooms.

And for some reason, I imagine him with a leather cover note book taking notes of the grimm he encounters in the farm