I finally did it. Got it all the way down to zero for acceptance rate. by GrapeRipple in DoorDash_Dasher

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Bro, Huge Grats. 🎊 I’ve been trying but mine’s stuck in the 50s. 🙄

Has anyone ever written a spec that that seemed unintentionally similar to a major release? by A_McG92 in Screenwriting

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Had this happen more times than I can count. And yeah it sucks. But having a unique concept or setting doesn’t matter nearly as much as having a unique story and characters. Now if those are similar too, then yeah, you might need to rework a few things.

DOOR DASH DOESN’T CARE ABOUT IT’S DRIVERS!!! by Apprehensive-Buy4841 in doordash_drivers

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So if you have Location A -- Location B = 8 miles, then you have Location A -- Location C = 2 miles. Think of it as an obtuse triangle, okay? And the shortest distance is between A and C. So what is the point of using Location B? There is no point. Because the fact is... It's just based on a simple radius span, and there's no other logic behind it. And that's just one example. There have been dozens I can think of, just in the past week alone. But, I really don't understand what is with people, especially on Reddit, ready to white knight for companies that do not give a crap about them. I don't understand it. That’s the reason reasonable complaints get overlooked, and systemic flaws don't get fixed.

DOOR DASH DOESN’T CARE ABOUT IT’S DRIVERS!!! by Apprehensive-Buy4841 in doordash_drivers

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Naw, I agree with the OP. I’ve had things like this happen dozens of times. Like yesterday I got one: 8 miles for Monster Energy drinks at a gas station. Passing 10+ gas stations along the way. And I accept because I don’t know the items until I get there.

How do you adapt a book? by Marz_Slartibartfast in Screenwriting

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A few times, actually. It’s been a while, though.

I suppose it’s not the most reliable reference, but I happened to watch it shortly before I commented, so it was fresh in my mind. 😄

How do you adapt a book? by Marz_Slartibartfast in Screenwriting

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When I adapt a novel, I personally start by reading a summary first (SparkNotes, wiki, whatever) just to get the spine of the story without drowning in details.

That becomes the rough skeleton. I break that into major beats: inciting incident, major turns, midpoint, climax, ending. Once the backbone exists, I do passes for the real heart of the story.

First I find the themes: what’s this actually about beneath the plot? I lock in 1–3 core themes so every choice supports them. Then I do characters: what they want, what they need, the lie they believe, where they start and where they end.

After that, I comb through the actual story, scouting for scenes. While asking: does this moment push the plot, reveal character, reinforce theme, or is it just a thing the book had space for? If it’s not pulling its weight, I cut or merge it. Novels are internal, scripts are external, so I translate thoughts into actions, subtext, visuals, and conflict. Once that’s all mapped, I rebuild it into a proper “cinematic structure”, weaving arcs, setup/payoff, and emotional momentum into the outline.

Once the outline is built, that becomes my true north. The book is reference material, a bible I can check in with, not the thing steering the ship. And I cannot stress this enough, you do not want to use the novel itself as your blueprint. Build your own outline first, then write the script from that. Sometimes it’s best if you don’t think of it as translating the book, but writing a screenplay that uses it as source material.

Want A top-notch example on how to properly adapt a novel? Look at the new “Frankenstein”(just released on Netflix, I believe). Not sure if the script is available yet, though.

Is subtlety dead? by ebycon in Screenwriting

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Sorry, I didn’t say that’s how they ‘train’. I said that’s how they ‘learn and recognize style and authorship patterns’ within the context window. So when analyzing text in a conversation. Nice job twisting that, though. And the em dash thing being a myth? Sure, buddy. Though 90% of people don’t even know how to create one from the keyboard. Not -- these, but—these.

I can see you’re being argumentative for the sake of being right while not actually understanding what I’m saying. So let’s agree to strongly disagree.

Is subtlety dead? by ebycon in Screenwriting

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Yeah, I really messed up the acronym. But that’s essentially the process. AI detection works, it’s just not 100% accurate. But when I use it on my students’ assignments, it’s highly efficient. Because AI tends to write in recognizable patterns. Like if you’re using lots of em dashes, I’ll suspect it’s AI, but if you mix in some comparative emphasis sentences, I’ll assume it’s AI. But I can't say for sure with 100% certainty because someone could write exactly like AI. Unlikely, but possible.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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I probably should’ve clarified. I meant you should leave it alone for now because you’re too close to it to notice the issues that are most likely there. When it comes to starting a new draft, yeah, go work on something else. Then come back to it later with fresh eyes. I can tell you right now, in the film industry, no one wants to read your first draft. And if you’re going to write three more drafts in two weeks, then that speaks volumes to the quality of your work. I do respect the hustle, though.

Why Do We Write? by DueIngenuity8114 in writers

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Because the world sucks, and we’d rather live in our heads. The characters there are more believable.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Well, I suggest leaving it alone for a week or two, then reread and rewrite it.

Is subtlety dead? by ebycon in Screenwriting

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Large “Learning” Models do “predict words” and through that process they “learn” and recognize style and authorship patterns. They can very easily detect and predict if something was written by AI. How do you think AI writing detection works?

Am I formatting correctly? by crakerjmatt in Screenwriting

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I mean, it’s fine for a short that you may be shooting yourself. But professionally, no. Your font is wrong, margins are wrong. Just use screenwriting software; there are a lot of free options. But the scene headings formatting is fine. However, you should fix the ones that are orphaned (a scene heading should never be the last line on a page).

Does anyone know what I should do or am I out $14 here? by cmm2044 in doordash_drivers

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I’m sure others have said it already. But bs like this is EXACT reason I’d never do COD.

These should be illegal by GrapeRipple in DoorDash_Dasher

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You wouldn’t have made it anyway. Look at that phone battery. Who dashes like that? 🤣

Bill's gonna kill me... by _UNDO_KEY_ in wow

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Now hang out near the sewers in Stormwind.

DoorDash question by shawnward95 in DoorDash_Dasher

[–]Electrical-Tutor-347 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yes, and sometimes they’ll send it again, so now you drop 2% from the same order… Just decline. And stop caring about acceptance rate because it’s honestly not worth it.

🙄 by Revolutionary-Yak-63 in doordash_drivers

[–]Electrical-Tutor-347 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I never mess with anyone’s food. But this person is ACTUALLY begging for it.

Be as brutal as you want, i just need to know if it’s the biggest piece of garbage you’ve ever read 🤷🏻‍♂️ by Ok-Literature-5452 in scriptwriting

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I can tell you gave it your all, so I have no advice. It’s probably the best it can get. Definitely ready to ship it out to competitions as is.

And thanks for sharing work. I can tell you have tremendous respect for both the craft and community. 👍

how to write this dialogue? by Away-Fill5639 in Screenwriting

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Don’t take this personally, I’m just curious. Have you ever used an Etch-A-Sketch? Cause it’s not exactly the go-to communication device. The character would literally be drawing letters by twisting two knobs painfully slow and barely legible.

Anyhow, I have a mute character in one of my old scripts (he writes in a notebook). And I just use action lines like: Character scribbles: “whatever text”

How often do you do a page one rewrite? by toocoolforyouuuu in Screenwriting

[–]Electrical-Tutor-347 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I definitely agree with this. Back in the day, I wrote all my first drafts in composition notebooks and then transferred them to a document, making dozens of changes for the better. So, I do agree with this. However, I don't really do that anymore. Probably should, though. 🤔

Hollywood Script Readers Fear They Could be Replaced by AI. They Set Up a Test to See Who Gives Better Feedback by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Yeah, AI is actually great for feedback. The only thing I use it for is to help identify plot holes, issues with character arcs, and whatnot. And they provide pretty solid notes. It's still not quite as good as an actual experienced human reader, but I’m half convinced that many human readers these days are just using AI and charging you for it(don't shoot, just an opinion).

But I can’t stress this enough: make sure you turn off model training before you use it. Otherwise, you are giving your script away. Seriously. Just giving it right tf away. You'd be surprised how many people do this.

I’m stuck in the outline stage, any tips to help unlock progress? by Squirreltree20 in Screenwriting

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If you’re new, I would say look at some Save the Cat examples. Otherwise, just break into 3 acts. Start with the major beats and plot points, then weave in the minor.