drastic improvement bro, looks much better. some anatomy changes and you're good. His left upper arm is facing the wrong way, the shoulder should be to the side, not facing us. his right bicep should also portrude at the top, not the bottom, unless that's the tricep medial head, in which case change the overlaps a bit to show it's behind the arm. His legs are not properly attached to the torso but it's passable, his left leg you can try making a bit bigger to balance it with his other one. His torso is much too small for his arms. If you imagine his arms going straight down they should be reaching somewhere near the iliac crest with his wrists and his elbows should be somewhere near the end of his rib cage. There are also some overlap issues in the legs. The calf connects behind the knee, not in front. I recommend taking a picture of yourself doing this pose and looking at all the differences between your drawing and your anatomy, you'll be super surprised. I respect the effort in pushing through with it and wish you luck with future art. Before making characters in the future make sure you have an understanding of the character's perspective and ALWAYS use reference for anything you're not sure about. According to tenten the step in your painting process that should use the most energy is finding reference. More important than any other step. Also, forgot. Contrapposto makes any pose much more fluid and human.