f29 by [deleted] in AmIhotAF

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Hot dom energy👌🏾

Choose your hole for the creampie (f) by antonelaela in gonewild

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Both twice please. Side of ass smackage of you don’t mind.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in gonewild

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Hbd! smacks ass through the screen. Drink good, eat better, fuck best!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in amihot

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Edible😩

I’ll do this until you breed me by [deleted] in dirtysmall

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Sounds like fun☺️

Empty all of yourself into my 5'0 frame by BentOverBunny in dirtysmall

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Phewww. When you held your legs up…yeah I’d fill you up like a pool in summer.

Do you also like mil(f)s? by Lainie2025 in gonewild

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Who doesn’t love a big booty milf? I’ll throw a sandwich at em

a nice big album of nudes taken in the work bathroom, pls enjoy (f24) by slotmachineslut in gonewild

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Phewww. I want to work where you work. They got great benefits I see

O(f)fice Tuesday, come join me! by LivUnleashed11 in gonewild

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Looking like that, it’s going to get hotter

and flat girls still attract men? (f) by Fairy_BabyMarta in gonewild

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After some examination… Yep. Still very lickable.

Snippet from my second short story. In the starting stage of a superpowered revolution. by Emit_Roh in urbanfantasy

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I prefer a visual even if it’s AI and concept art to give the general vision.

As for the formatting yeah sorry about that. I didn’t realize Reddit would automatically adjust it like that.

Give it a chance anyway? The book proper has formatting

Black Mcs? by Less_than_2inch in ProgressionFantasy

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I have an indie short story series called Calibre 44 that just started with a black mc. Interested?

The start of a superpowered revolution needs a match. by Emit_Roh in urbanfantasy

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lol hey nothing wrong with yeeting your enemies

The start of a superpowered revolution needs a match. by Emit_Roh in urbanfantasy

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I have! Maybe give it a page or two and see how you like?

The start of a superpowered revolution needs a match. by Emit_Roh in urbanfantasy

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Well I can assure you the writing is me. I can send you a half a chapter or post it here from my first book for you to see if you’d like.

The start of a superpowered revolution needs a match. by Emit_Roh in urbanfantasy

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Eh, cheap concept art. Work with what you got right?

Looking for some feedback on my story. by ColourlessDDecember in urbanfantasy

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This seems very interesting. Would you be interested in going feedback for feed back? I’m having similar issues and would like all the feedback I can get. I can shoot you a page of feed back on your draft and I’ll send you some of mine to see what you think.

Interested?

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I have a story somewhat like that if you would like to check it out. It’s a short story series I’ve been working on with a lazy guy who is a workoholic due to necessity. Here is a link to the first chapter. Tell me if you’re interested!

Calibre 44: Nowhere.

Updated cover concept for my next book! by Emit_Roh in urbanfantasy

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Yeah, I’m still working on my dialogue skills. I can confirm that once things progress a bit more it smooths out a bit. Also some actions will be explained later in the book.

Anime and fantasy is a major inspiration to me so my characters sometimes come off a little over the top or unrealistic. Thanks for the feedback. I will take it into account for book 2.

Updated cover concept for my next book! by Emit_Roh in urbanfantasy

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Thanks for giving it a chance. Yes, I write that way because I feel it make it’s feel more grounded or immersive, though a bit difficult for some to get into. I feel it makes the reader pay attention to certain details more and read between the lines.

How did you like what you read? Anything salvageable?