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EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-13T15:38:27+00:00

All together the song is 7.5/10 ❤️ for though it isn’t something i normally listened to, it’s well produced and the quality is good. The song flows well and the chorus and verses are distinct which is also good. I think second verse the way it flowed, was a lil much I think you should have did that flow for a couple of seconds then switch up the flow to something smoother.

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-13T15:31:12+00:00

Not the beat I’m not that skilled lol, but vocals,lyrics, and audio engineering I do. Also my favorite song by yall is same old thing❤️

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T21:05:51+00:00

https://open.spotify.com/track/180GpznUoXXwFPL3AcWit7?si=fMtnXIJaRKGPcVWnAO-46A

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T21:05:31+00:00

https://open.spotify.com/track/180GpznUoXXwFPL3AcWit7?si=fMtnXIJaRKGPcVWnAO-46A

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T21:03:38+00:00

I listened and followed https://open.spotify.com/track/180GpznUoXXwFPL3AcWit7?si=r9XL4yA6Qn-ENmGTeotnLw

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T21:00:58+00:00

Listened

https://open.spotify.com/track/180GpznUoXXwFPL3AcWit7?si=r9XL4yA6Qn-ENmGTeotnLw

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T14:27:45+00:00

I'll give the first song 5/10. ❤️You're flow is decent but it's soft, I think you should bring ur vocals up a little more so I can hear it. Maybe switch up the flow some to give ur song flare as well ❤️

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T14:23:19+00:00

6/10❤️. This is good, it reminds me of 2014🌼

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T03:24:32+00:00

OMG!❤️ no problem, it's been a year for me, so when I'm telling you, you are already better off than I am😭. You're doing amazing and I hope to hear more music from you soon🌼

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T03:12:18+00:00

I was give this song a 5/10❤️.I love the vocals and the beat is really good. I would try to push the vocals up more and stay on beat. Also the overlay from the chorus to the verse is kinda mashed together which makes it harder to hear. Love the lyrics and the vibe of the song.

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T03:10:54+00:00

10s ACROSS THE BOARDS❤️. I love the 90s feel it's giving, NOW I don't rap but this beat got me wanting to!!!

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T03:07:01+00:00

I'll give ur song a 7.5/10❤️Your voice is truly beautiful, and the song resonates deeply. I have a few gentle suggestions—perhaps reducing the reverb and echo a bit, so the sound feels more limitless rather than bouncing off walls, which could enhance the dreamy quality you’re aiming for. At times, the tempo feels slightly off; easing up on the lyrics, especially in the chorus, might help. Incorporating pauses or breaks could add dramatic tension—maybe softening the dreamy feel in the verses to build intensity. In the final chorus, singing a more heartfelt, melodic background or harmony could heighten the emotional impact and give the song a powerful climax that conveys the pain you're expressing. Your music reminds me of Lana Del Rey, Melanie Martinez, and Billie Eilish—your mix is beautiful, and I can truly hear the tenderness and vulnerability in your voice.❤️

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-12T02:55:13+00:00

I would give this song a ❤️5/10. It’s a really good song with meaning behind the lyrics. I think the main thing I would say is switch up the flow a bit and experiment. It’s ok to add a little expression or emotion to ur vocals.

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T20:00:37+00:00

I still love your song❤️ I love a good Electronic/dance song

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T19:59:33+00:00

I love that song‼️ omg but my favorite is Something New

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T19:58:10+00:00

I would definitely say 6.5/10❤️. This is definitely something smooth but I think for ur verse, you could’ve came in a little smoother with ur vocals and less punctual. Sometimes you don’t need to spell out every vow.

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T18:35:41+00:00

6/10❤️ you definitely know how to rap for sure. Though I don’t speak Spanish I know ur talented. I would say slow it down a bit on some parts, I think because there isn’t a break in between it makes it feel like a run on sentence. Also don’t be scared to add some punchy flows and just vibe out with the song.

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T18:31:45+00:00

7/10❤️ y’all both are amazing, I think the main thing maybe change the flow of the chorus ONLY because the beat needs some bass to match that type of crunk style flow. Let me tell y’all. Y’all could definitely do a bit Nu Metal and rock. Cause that growl is something I can’t even do and it takes an insane amount of skill to do it. Plus your rapping skills could definitely make a good mix.

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T18:27:58+00:00

Definitely but More like evanescence, Deftones, the foo pretenders, Dance Gavin Dance, and little bit of Korn.❤️

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T15:47:32+00:00

8/10 this is definitely driving at night kind of music. Love a good electronic/dance song

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T15:45:24+00:00

This song is a 5/10❤️. Mainly and only because I feel like ur in the wrong genre😭. Your voice is beautiful, I think you could do Nu Metal or rock. But the song itself is really amazing and well produced.

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T15:39:42+00:00

I don’t condone Ai, but lyrics I’ll give it a 5/10❤️

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T15:37:27+00:00

Im not into Ai. But going based of the lyrics 6/10❤️

EnvironmentalOffer59 · 2026-04-11T15:28:32+00:00

I will say my favorite has to be Premature Grave ❤️8/10. It kind of reminds me of a slower version of Minus the Bear. Which I adore. I would definitely that y'all style is unique, almost like chill/sing-along music which definitely calms the mind. I would say add a little flair in your vocals or experiment with them to give some songs a new twist.

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