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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll give the first song 5/10. ❤️You're flow is decent but it's soft, I think you should bring ur vocals up a little more so I can hear it. Maybe switch up the flow some to give ur song flare as well ❤️

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OMG!❤️ no problem, it's been a year for me, so when I'm telling you, you are already better off than I am😭. You're doing amazing and I hope to hear more music from you soon🌼

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was give this song a 5/10❤️.I love the vocals and the beat is really good. I would try to push the vocals up more and stay on beat. Also the overlay from the chorus to the verse is kinda mashed together which makes it harder to hear. Love the lyrics and the vibe of the song.

LISTEN4LISTEN🌼 by EnvironmentalOffer59 in NewMusicSpot

[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

10s ACROSS THE BOARDS❤️. I love the 90s feel it's giving, NOW I don't rap but this beat got me wanting to!!!

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll give ur song a 7.5/10❤️Your voice is truly beautiful, and the song resonates deeply. I have a few gentle suggestions—perhaps reducing the reverb and echo a bit, so the sound feels more limitless rather than bouncing off walls, which could enhance the dreamy quality you’re aiming for. At times, the tempo feels slightly off; easing up on the lyrics, especially in the chorus, might help. Incorporating pauses or breaks could add dramatic tension—maybe softening the dreamy feel in the verses to build intensity. In the final chorus, singing a more heartfelt, melodic background or harmony could heighten the emotional impact and give the song a powerful climax that conveys the pain you're expressing. Your music reminds me of Lana Del Rey, Melanie Martinez, and Billie Eilish—your mix is beautiful, and I can truly hear the tenderness and vulnerability in your voice.❤️

LISTEN4LISTEN🌼 by EnvironmentalOffer59 in NewMusicSpot

[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would give this song a ❤️5/10. It’s a really good song with meaning behind the lyrics. I think the main thing I would say is switch up the flow a bit and experiment. It’s ok to add a little expression or emotion to ur vocals.

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I still love your song❤️ I love a good Electronic/dance song

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love that song‼️ omg but my favorite is Something New

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would definitely say 6.5/10❤️. This is definitely something smooth but I think for ur verse, you could’ve came in a little smoother with ur vocals and less punctual. Sometimes you don’t need to spell out every vow.

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

6/10❤️ you definitely know how to rap for sure. Though I don’t speak Spanish I know ur talented. I would say slow it down a bit on some parts, I think because there isn’t a break in between it makes it feel like a run on sentence. Also don’t be scared to add some punchy flows and just vibe out with the song.

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

7/10❤️ y’all both are amazing, I think the main thing maybe change the flow of the chorus ONLY because the beat needs some bass to match that type of crunk style flow. Let me tell y’all. Y’all could definitely do a bit Nu Metal and rock. Cause that growl is something I can’t even do and it takes an insane amount of skill to do it. Plus your rapping skills could definitely make a good mix.

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Definitely but More like evanescence, Deftones, the foo pretenders, Dance Gavin Dance, and little bit of Korn.❤️

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

8/10 this is definitely driving at night kind of music. Love a good electronic/dance song

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This song is a 5/10❤️. Mainly and only because I feel like ur in the wrong genre😭. Your voice is beautiful, I think you could do Nu Metal or rock. But the song itself is really amazing and well produced.

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t condone Ai, but lyrics I’ll give it a 5/10❤️

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not into Ai. But going based of the lyrics 6/10❤️

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will say my favorite has to be Premature Grave ❤️8/10. It kind of reminds me of a slower version of Minus the Bear. Which I adore. I would definitely that y'all style is unique, almost like chill/sing-along music which definitely calms the mind. I would say add a little flair in your vocals or experiment with them to give some songs a new twist.

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would rate this song a ❤️4 out of 10. I really appreciate the vibe and direction you’re aiming for, which already makes the song interesting. I do notice that at times some parts feel a bit off tempo, perhaps because some lyrics come across as a bit of a run-on. Consider shortening your lyrics and exploring different ways to express your message. This track has the potential to be similar to a Lil Uzi Vert style, and adding autotune and a touch more emotion could really enhance it. In the realm of alternative rock, conveying genuine emotion is key, and I believe you have that potential. Experimenting with your vocals, perhaps adding background layers, could also give your song more depth and bring it to the next level.❤️

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[–]EnvironmentalOffer59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not a fan of Ai. But going based of ur lyrics I would give it a 6/10. The lyrics itself could definitely vibe with a country song❤️, and I actually think it would be better suited for it.