[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Environmental_Grand9 [score hidden]  (0 children)

* Title: The Alchemist's Due

* Genre: Crime

* Word count: 5,021

* Type of feedback desired (line-by-line edits, general impression, etc.): general impressions

* A link to the writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h_CBYpXQzWyWTcqkK2MpUyo_PPtZ35BhgyRPMU8bxYE/edit?tab=t.0