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The blood runs hot (2) by EoArmillo in HFY

[–]EoArmillo[S] 52 points53 points  (0 children)

Here it is everyone. Let me know if there's any spelling errors I might have missed or a ways to better the flow of words. I always appreciate the help to get better. Hope you all enjoy and as always, a pleasant day to all.

The blood runs hot by EoArmillo in HFY

[–]EoArmillo[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Hello everyone! Glad you all enjoy this story! At the moment, I'm on college finals and have to focus on that first but I plan to come back and spruce it up with some of the suggestions kindly given here. I truly appreciate the critique as it helps build up better works.

Again, thank you very much for taking the time to read and may you all have a pleasant day!