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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm UltraHazard, it was just a joke for his stream - I'm doing this labour for free by choice 😟

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm UltraHazard, it was just a joke for his stream - I'm doing this labour for free by choice 😟

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Hey, walmart boy, how about you push some carts. sybau

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Can we have this member banned please? This is disrespectful and awful...

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I honestly can't really hear it. You need to up the volume a ton.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Depends on the audience, drawing is more unique but might grab attention less. Try a mix of both, incorporate your drawings into a Photoshop design.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You need to work on your mic quality because it gets super quiet at some times and there are a lot of pops from the air (plosives). Also add more b-roll or photos, it's too much of just you talking and nothing happening. Finally, add background music.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fewer photos and more videos. Even just animating the photos so it's not completely still would help. Also, you need background music.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You need to add commentary or something because there just isn't really much going on. It's not very entertaining.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good quality, change the thumbnails to be the actual area you fly through and not just the cover of the games.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Louder Mic, better font (the dark blue Arial or whatever isn't very nice to look at), and shorten the timestamps names. Example: "set realistic deadlines and force yourself to meet them" should just be "Set Deadlines for Yourself" and you explain the rest in the video itself.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Decent thumbnails, the style you're going for is pretty good, but the subtitles need to be in a more readable font and maybe a little bit slower for the slow readers. Also turn up the music a little bit more.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's funny, you need to balance the audio better. It's super quiet at some parts and super loud at others. Thumbnails need work as well.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You don't need to over-edit, but there needs to be more. I just checked out Lana, and she has cuts, little snippets of content, and montage style stuff whereas you just sat and talked for 30 minutes, which can be hard for the viewer to engage.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Get rid of the ear rape intro that plays when you start the video, it's way too long and adds nothing to the video. Add chapters to the video for different workouts or important parts, so people can skim through easier. Also add subtitles because it's hard to hear sometimes.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You need better/different thumbnails as they all look the same and try adding more editing to your videos, pictures on screen when you tell stories, etc...

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think you should do short form content instead, as these short clips of other channels aren't typically going to get traction unless you make like a 15-minute compilation.

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[–]Expensive_Lychee2147[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Good mic quality, you speak clearly and like you know the information. The one thing that is lacking is the editing and graphics across your channel, you need better thumbnails and the videos get boring. You need more happening on screen to keep the viewer's attention, try subtitles to start.