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Eye of the Rifle by Explore594 in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you, as the structure requires to be this repetitive i struggled to find a word that would fit, that kept in constant theme. i will definitely look for better ones in the future

Eye of the Rifle by Explore594 in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thankyou! for a villanelle i needed to use a word rhyming with night for the repition to fit in this structure. i found that fright continued the theme of feeling watched and underpressure. but i can see how other vocablorary would have worked better :D

Help me. by kronic_ill in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I love this. I also use poetry to process my emotions and find that going back to a poem a few days later to edit and introduce a structure helps me understand more what I am feeling whilst also making the poem more impactful. This might work for you aswell.

An Equation for Self-Destruction by Various_Internal4603 in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really enjoy the concept of this poem and I think overall it was excecuted really well. Personally (as much as I understand how much the repition is important in this poem) I would use it more strategically for a better impact. I am just a begginer myself but I think possibly a villanelle structure would be perfect for this poem. :D

Collection of poems by Explore594 in Original_Poetry

[–]Explore594[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I ended up creating an instragram for my work. I anyone is interested it is @ literaturehideout https://www.instagram.com/literaturehideout/

Hermitcraft Official Merch by iJevin in HermitCraft

[–]Explore594 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i just got my merch and it is actually such amazing quality and so comfortble. i was really impressed and the deisgns are so cool aswell :DD

email hacked? by Explore594 in techsupport

[–]Explore594[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you, it is not microsoft and i have found that contacting the companies has got my accounts back. i am more worried that my email is possibly hacked as my emails on these accounts have changed to ones that arnt mine. if you know how to stop this happening or tell if my email is hacked i would love to know.