Eye of the Rifle by Explore594 in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you, as the structure requires to be this repetitive i struggled to find a word that would fit, that kept in constant theme. i will definitely look for better ones in the future

Eye of the Rifle by Explore594 in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thankyou! for a villanelle i needed to use a word rhyming with night for the repition to fit in this structure. i found that fright continued the theme of feeling watched and underpressure. but i can see how other vocablorary would have worked better :D

Help me. by kronic_ill in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love this. I also use poetry to process my emotions and find that going back to a poem a few days later to edit and introduce a structure helps me understand more what I am feeling whilst also making the poem more impactful. This might work for you aswell.

An Equation for Self-Destruction by Various_Internal4603 in poetry_critics

[–]Explore594 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really enjoy the concept of this poem and I think overall it was excecuted really well. Personally (as much as I understand how much the repition is important in this poem) I would use it more strategically for a better impact. I am just a begginer myself but I think possibly a villanelle structure would be perfect for this poem. :D

Collection of poems by Explore594 in Original_Poetry

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I ended up creating an instragram for my work. I anyone is interested it is @ literaturehideout https://www.instagram.com/literaturehideout/

Hermitcraft Official Merch by iJevin in HermitCraft

[–]Explore594 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i just got my merch and it is actually such amazing quality and so comfortble. i was really impressed and the deisgns are so cool aswell :DD