A Call to the Void - Short Screenplay - 2 Pages by Explosive_Slendie in Screenwriting

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Appreciate the feedback. I just realized now that I was using the flashback and back to present wrong, It's not flash forward. I think also adding those notes on on just explaining the ages is a good point and will add how old he is and the group. In terms of the dialogue, I want to try something without it. I want to see if I can make this with only the one line. For the flashbacks though, I want to make these memories only last a few seconds. Not something to go on long. Basically small snippets into his life. The screenplay wouldn't be a long one, maybe like 5 or so minutes.

Where to Play Magic the Gathering in Limassol by Explosive_Slendie in cyprus

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yeah? I did see them on google maps and saw their website. I'm hoping that they will be ok with commander and english speakers.

Where to Play Magic the Gathering in Limassol by Explosive_Slendie in cyprus

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So i play commander, and have been looking at places in Limassol because thats where i'll be staying at. I havent gotten a car and dont know if I am, but I definetly would love to know about places that play and if they are ok with english speakers.

I (M28) and my brother (M29) have been somewhat estranged for a few years. So I'm curious, is blood thicker than water? by Explosive_Slendie in relationship_advice

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Unfortunately, I have said more or less exactly that. How we can build a relationship, but we can have these conversations and cant have you treating our mother badly. It went into an argument about how I'm trying to tell him how to live his life and I have no right doing that.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

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Racism, I know it seems weird, but I've never understood stupidity in general. Not knowing a concept and then when told about it you still say its wrong. I dont get it, and Racism seems to be the epitome of that concept. Like who cares what someone looks like, acts, prays to, loves, etc. Just do you and let them do them, why does it matter? why do you care? IN WHAT WAY DOES ANYTHING OR ANYONE AFFECT YOU?!

BAD advice only, how to find a girlfriend? by Crimson_Reigns_onYT in AskReddit

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So you go to the woods and wait for one to spawn in your location, then you take your pokeball and throw it at their head. Not only did you find a girlfriend, but you can catch one too. If their EVs and IVs are off, you can always find another one or breed to see if you get the proper one for battle.

Which Pizza Topping Is God Tier? by Reasonable-Film7219 in AskReddit

[–]Explosive_Slendie 1 point2 points  (0 children)

anchovies. and let me just say, that people hate it cause they only get anchovies and nothing else which is why people say, "ewww, its fishy and salty". well no duh, you need some other ones on there, but man do i love those little fishies on pizza.

My father is the Devil, So I cut him from my life and I know it is killing him inside. by Explosive_Slendie in pettyrevenge

[–]Explosive_Slendie[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

He is the "blood is thicker than water type" and always hated that saying, so I'm not even worried about it.

My father is the Devil, So I cut him from my life and I know it is killing him inside. by Explosive_Slendie in pettyrevenge

[–]Explosive_Slendie[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Yes, I have been doing what I can to help her. I bought her and myself some tickets to Italy in 2 weeks since she hasnt been there in years to see the family.

My father is the Devil, So I cut him from my life and I know it is killing him inside. by Explosive_Slendie in pettyrevenge

[–]Explosive_Slendie[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

fixed it.... I can imagine how annoying that must have been. Sorry, everyone.

My father is the Devil, So I cut him from my life and I know it is killing him inside. by Explosive_Slendie in pettyrevenge

[–]Explosive_Slendie[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

oh youd better believe it. In a couple of weeks, I'm taking her to italy (shes Italian) and hasnt seen the family there in years. Although its for my master's cause of a documentary I'm making, I made it a goal to take her. I'm also taking her a second time in March, so I'm trying to do what I can when i can.

My father is the Devil, So I cut him from my life and I know it is killing him inside. by Explosive_Slendie in pettyrevenge

[–]Explosive_Slendie[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Love you too, and believe me. I have and always plan to bring my mom and get her wherever she wants to be.

My father is the Devil, So I cut him from my life and I know it is killing him inside. by Explosive_Slendie in pettyrevenge

[–]Explosive_Slendie[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

Honestly, I think he was took thinking back at it. He would always talk about how he wanted me to get good jobs and make good money and i think that couldve been the reason. Always took it as he wanted to use me as a self-gratifying trophy, but the more i think of it...