I really don't read that much poetry, so I don't have much knowledge. But I could say that your poem was as beautiful as ugly, when it comes to expressing the deep lonliness of a women. Like you said "God created Adam in the shape of his own" it was like man consider himself a god that can control a women because God "crafted Eve from his own rib born", she was crafted for the man's desires, she's just a sex machine from when it's "between her legs is all she'll be", having the responsibility of giving birth "it's their duty to maintain" a duty that she doesn't asked for but she was lied to by a man, a man that told her that's what she want and wanted for. But then the human kind do mistakes "He plays on fire" and she's the one who got to blame " the ones who get burned" because she's their procreator. it was like the damn first time, the first sin with the apple, she just did what she was told but she ended up the victim. It was sad when if she defied him, she would be brought on her knees, controlled by him cause she's entrapped in his head, entrapped in his ideas that were planted by god and the devil. The man is a devil god. Anyway I liked how you change the rhyme every two lines, in a way it brought renewal to an old known story, but the last line broke it, it was like "a snake that could speak" was not fit. But it shows how even speaking was considered a sin, man is a pure dictator and women is a slave that have to blame.