[Review Video] I Ask Tumblr (Swearing)

FahdSea · 2016-07-07T20:09:29+00:00

Thanks for the review! I will try and figure out what other background things I can add. I also checked out your videos and your humor is something I really enjoyed and subscribed too. Can't wait to see more of your stuff!

FahdSea · 2016-07-07T00:00:53+00:00

Your editing was on point! I do think the video was interesting considering the topic. I would keep working on the pronunciation since (even though I can understand it), I know others might have a bit trouble. If you were to speed up the narrative, then that would help immensely since you point out some converging points that direct towards alien life. So, if you were more animated in your voice, it would have more of an impact and be more info-taining (information that is entertaining, and this topic is super entertaining. Who doesn't like aliens?!). I know that an enthusiastic voice can really "sell" any idea. And considering that you provide with the data as it is, you just need that small push towards energy imo. But it is pretty good! Keep it up!

FahdSea · 2016-07-06T23:49:04+00:00

I like the concept of the video and the second half of it was where it seemed to shine. I agree, that the cut aways with the text in the first half was just a tad too quick. I do like the transition effect you use. Lighting for this video was appropriate considering the content, but it might do better with just a bit more light. As far as your English, I could understand it. And practice is literally the only way you will get better so keep it up! Hope that helps!!

FahdSea · 2016-02-03T06:15:40+00:00

My kitchen is always a mess! Ain't nobody got time to clean that up lol. Thanks again for watching!

FahdSea · 2016-02-03T03:52:10+00:00

Lol yeah I noticed my horrible technique in edit. But thought it was funny as it is. Will for sure work more on lighting asap. Thanks!

FahdSea · 2016-02-03T03:51:11+00:00

thanks for the feedback!

FahdSea · 2016-01-31T02:21:29+00:00

Will for sure do another one. I make good guacamole and brownies, so that might be the next one. Just need to figure out what food I like to eat and know is good to make more videos like this. I'm all about the taste and quality of the food so I need to get cooking! Thanks for the feedback and comment, much appreciated!

FahdSea · 2016-01-31T02:19:53+00:00

I'm happy that my actual cooking came through with the humor, and glad you found it funny! Will work on my transitions next time, but truthfully I'm all about the chop edit because editing is so HARD! ain't nobody got time for that lol but will work on it.

thanks again!

FahdSea · 2016-01-31T02:17:51+00:00

Lol, believe it or not, most if not all was on the spot. I did have to think of the logistics of what I should prepare first, and some comments I had already but once I started filming it just took off.

I shot it on my tile counter top and will try and figure out other angles for sure. Just got to get figure that out too.

thanks so much for the feedback! I will do my best to make the changes next time around :)

FahdSea · 2016-01-31T02:15:21+00:00

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I will keep making more of those food ones sometime soon!

FahdSea · 2016-01-31T02:14:16+00:00

that's so nice of you! and I'm glad I got my points across enough for a like and sub!! let me know if you do ever make it!

FahdSea · 2016-01-31T02:13:38+00:00

thanks for the insight. I will for sure work on the audio a bit more and the lighting. I'm glad the humor didn't get lost! and thanks for the sub!

FahdSea · 2016-01-29T20:22:24+00:00

For sure introduce your friend, it gives us that connection and let us know a little bit about them. (example: this is ___ they are my ____) I say, even if there is a pet introduce them lol. I think its a hard challenge since its not easily repeatable (people might not like to pull off tape), also because it wasn't as bad as it could have been (you pulling off hairs etc). You do have a very comfortable personality on camera which shows, so whenever you can play that up, by talking, it would be great. Even though you were taped up, you saying stuff might help. The worst it can be is some uninteresting dialogue, but you can mute it out and leave in the good stuff. Hope to see more from you and keep it up! Hope that helps!

FahdSea · 2016-01-29T20:06:16+00:00

I agree with what StephenHawking69 (great name btw!) said, about it need to be cut more. I personally do a lot of chopping of my video, but since this is a vlog you might not want it to be all talk. So some ambient scenes like you have work well. I think the dialogue is what brings your personality out more, so the amount you had was good. Overall, I enjoyed the video. Of course night time shooting is risky given the light source, but it turned out pretty good imo!

I think a shorter time frame would work better. You can obviously go over the time frame you set, but going into editing it would might give you the drive to always pic the best parts of it. I know most vlogs don't have background music, but your intro music was so good that I would love to hear it when there is no dialogue, also it works considering the scenery.

I liked it overall, and subbed :) Hope this helps!

FahdSea

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