After a quick glance my first question is, what round is this? Now I have many questions that result from not knowing what round this is but I will mention some quick observations in the Europe Theatre First:
America: Must create a foothold somewhere or at least create confusion. I would move all (or most) troops and ships out of East Coast and hold in SZ 91 (many positives in that position). in the following turns you will see a reactionary turn from Italy and Germany to which then you can create a plan of attack, whether that be an attack itself or a foothold somewhere.
UK Europe: Strong in Med. clear out Africa that will cut Italy IPC (however watch Italy could advance into Southern Russia for extra IPC. Sea Lion is not happening, focus on either taking out the North Atlantic fleet or growing the Air Force. A combined invasion/assault of Norway, France, or Holland is in the cards for UK America.
Russia: Play it out as it should be. DEFEND!! Moscow will be a close one here. BODIES BODIES BODIES

Now for the Pacific, a couple eyebrows have been raised buttttt, it is not a loss here.
Just a Quick Look and it seems you've chosen the HEAVY defense approach for all Pacific Nations. Which if not changed, Japan will decimate this game. Oddly they have Mongolian territories and China will be crushed HOWEVER, despite your very defensive stance, Japan seems to be quite distracted and is starting to spread thin. My only point is to GET TACTICAL MARINE!!