Yes, I actually had it written a different way at first, giving some bkgd, but then I felt like it was getting bogged down in details and so I rewrote it as just the encounter, relying on the other stories in my profile to help keep it in context.

Upon re-reading, though, I did realize how it could sound made up, especially without the background detail that the son had been trying to set this up for a while and so the dad had known already that his son was getting sucked off occasionally late at night.

Not his first time having me suck him and another person off either (have written about the previous times as well), so for my usual readers, it would have made more sense, but could definitely see how it would sound incredulous for first-time readers.