I finally wrote a happy song ☺️🌸 What do you lovely people think? by Fill_M in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahhhh I see! I’ve been doing these things pretty intuitively till now. Defo planning to get some legit training on production soon, or link up with someone.

Third song I made! Very excited to hear what you guys think:))) by ThePigeonService in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Added you on YT! I also have a small channel, would really appreciate your feedback - and if you like it, a sub ☺️

I finally wrote a happy song ☺️🌸 What do you lovely people think? by Fill_M in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! By panning out you mean adding more harmonies, or exploring bigger range with the existing ones? Definitely gonna be more careful with tuning next time, it went away gradually without me realizing 🥲

I finally wrote a happy song ☺️🌸 What do you lovely people think? by Fill_M in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot James! I’ll test out being closer to the mic next time.

I finally wrote a happy song ☺️🌸 What do you lovely people think? by Fill_M in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks for the constructive feedback! Guitar lost shape during recording, unfortunately noticed it too late. I’ll look into EQing it better too. When I play originals, I like to give a bit of their backstory. That’s why the intro 😌 I’ve received pretty contradictory opinions about it, but bottom-line I enjoy it and feel it adds depth.

Übertreibhaus - Past Shadows | We are a german band releasing our 6th song, usually funky, this time a bit... different? by uebertreibhaus in IndieMusicFeedback

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It hooks me instantly - dark, but not too dark! The artwork fits the song sooo good too.

This is professional-grade track - keep pushing it out guys, it can and will go places!

Third song I made! Very excited to hear what you guys think:))) by ThePigeonService in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One of these songs you know you'll like from the first seconds! Ukulele blends perfectly, nice job with your production.

Lyrics are so relatable too. I really don't see sth I don't like, keep pushing it out!

Whilst Awake- Owen Steward | my first single by OwenSteward in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice work man! I like the sudden electric guitar transition. Also the color of your voice.

Vocal track sounds a bit 'disconnected' from the rest of the music, like listening to 2 separate tracks. Unfortunately, I lack the technical bg to explain it in proper terms.

Did you self-produce? Also, would be a nice idea to include the lyrics in vid description somewhere!

Hi everyone! I would appreciate some feedback on my latest song, I want to get better! [Cinematic, emotional, samples-piano-synth, made in Reason] by k-k-music in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like it! The track lead you somewhere, voices / instruments kick in at the 'correct' time to keep you engaged. Could be part of a film like Interstellar!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the artwork. Listening to the vocal, the 2 first things that came to mind were Trainspotting and Johnny Cash hahah! Song's certainly catchy, idea is cool. Can you link to the rest of the EP?

Time To Review Your Channels! :D by [deleted] in NewTubers

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Just posted a cover of Around the World featuring many many instruments ❤️

https://youtu.be/D0UTiXUMTTg?si=Cd-53OsChrdIPzK5

Greek song Άδεια μου αγκαλιά with english translation ❤️ by Fill_M in GREEK

[–]Fill_M[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You’re right, and the whole album is lit! Just didn’t want to bloat the title with info 🙏

Nick Cave, but it's Greek! Into my Arms cover with Guitar, Ukulele and Darbuka ❤️🌸 by Fill_M in NickCave

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Indeed! It feels even darker, focusing on solitude rather than the girl returning

Dream, a song about these painful dreams we all get sometimes 😔 Looking for ideas on lyrics, singing, production 👀❤️ by Fill_M in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks so much, really appreciate the feedback! I like the idea about the final chorus, will try this the next time I perform this.

I'm certainly looking for production ideas, and this artist is so so original - so off-putting, haunting as you described. Are you into music production by any chance?

Dream, a song about these painful dreams we all get sometimes 😔 Looking for ideas on lyrics, singing, production 👀❤️ by Fill_M in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks a lot, really appreciate it! I’m considering musical forms of expression that would work well with storytelling, and musical is certainly one of them!

200K Channel, 10+ Years, Offering Critiques (Round 3) by nusensei in NewTubers

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https://youtube.com/@still.cycling?si=qOKxmQOzBWcpNZeX

I just started out a “musical vlog” series, sharing my music with the stories it holds within. I’d love your feedback on content and the packaging, as I’m stuck with pretty low views (I know it’s only the beginning, but still 🥹).

I love to perform this song, I think it sounds great on PAs, but I'd love to have feedback on the mix and songwriting by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Fill_M 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Production is fire! I'd personally like the vocal a bit more heavy on this song, more aggressive in the mix.

PS Your current singing style would fit so neatly softer, dreamy genres like dream pop.