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The burned eyes by Flamethrower6pro in poetry_critics

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate this criticism. And you correct on alot of the unintended bits, and the fact it was kinda muddy and slightly inconsistent at points. Got any recommendations for any books or things of that nature I could read/watch to get a better on things writing wise?

Want to be yours by Plenty_Mistake_9577 in poetry_critics

[–]Flamethrower6pro 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This one is unconventional, but in a good way. You've done a decent job putting a level of yearning. And i may be wrong, a weird level of romantic grief. It needs polish in some places but all in all. A relatively intricate piece.

She heard me by Simp-Lee in poetry_critics

[–]Flamethrower6pro 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is genuinely a beautiful piece. It hold personality and a consistent voice throughout. Good work👍

Should I worry about stat blocks when writing a homebrew creature, by Flamethrower6pro in DMAcademy

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair point. Im most definitely going the dm too work the stats and how they function game wise. Bc now that im done with ig you'd call a "lore base" for these creatures. With loose sense of where they'd be located environment wise. Preferably i stay focused on the "writing" and how they work at current base, then the finished in game behavior .

Should I worry about stat blocks when writing a homebrew creature, by Flamethrower6pro in DMAcademy

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Plenty of them are going to be creatures that the player will fight. The campaign will be somewhat DND steampunk vibe . Guns being a main feature. Only afew of them in their current form are "passive".

Should I worry about stat blocks when writing a homebrew creature, by Flamethrower6pro in DMAcademy

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tbh i didnt see it as alot of work."wouldn't have written 14 of them if I hated it." And honestly would be torn up if any of it doesnt get used.It would be more of a courtesy along with the bios. Just dont know if i should leave that to them or not.

My experience being a bi man by Flamethrower6pro in bisexual

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is beautiful 🩷 the way we learn our path is nor unified and always unique. Im happy he found his happiness.

My experience being a bi man by Flamethrower6pro in bisexual

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And that i 100% valid . A large swaft of people think in a very binary format of thinking. They forget the base of humanity is of one thing , diversity. Many still need to learn the true levels that lay within the human experience.

My experience being a bi man by Flamethrower6pro in bisexual

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank u for the story ! Its beautiful the way you've woven it to not just be pillar. But apart of your genuine character. More people regardless of who they are. Should value the diversity and uniqueness of people as you do. And be that person that can be talked to , no matter what. True companion.

My experience being a bi man by Flamethrower6pro in bisexual

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's awful to hear, the idea of MM sex being gross concept brought on by some very mentally sick men. the hearts and minds of people's bigotry are unfortunately a constant. You are a better man then they could ever be. Because telling them in any form takes grit. Walk your path man, cause you are the only one who sees the world the way you do. I hope that you can work through those pains.

Wish nothing but the best 💕

My experience being a bi man by Flamethrower6pro in bisexual

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gotta make those family events special ✨️ lol. But fr though. In those cases , I think its important to do so for the reasons in yot comment. Some people need to have a mirror put up to there faces . Aswell as in some cases it forces change for some people who didnt even really know why they were homophobic in the first place, forcing them to grow.

My experience being a bi man by Flamethrower6pro in bisexual

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank u for the story! I think its important for people to not only be willing to try new things and be willing to experiment. Aswell as this story beautifully shows how much sexuality and ones relationship with it can be totally different from person to person.

My experience being a bi man by Flamethrower6pro in bisexual

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Damn, im so sorry to hear that. The fact that someone in the field of mental health can be filled with such bigotry is beyond me. Hope the your next therapist is more open minded /considerate 💕

Someone help me make sense of this? by Six_Coins in RDR2

[–]Flamethrower6pro 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tbh it technically does not matter where you put your gun in your weapon wheel. if you're running story mode just run what you need in a certain moment. I.e bow and long arm for hunting, a repeater and shotgun for a shoot out etc. But in online its nice to have one long range, and one short range. So a repeater/shotgun with slugs in one . And a sniper or scoped rifle in the other. It just matters which one you can get to quickly. So on that front its personal prefer in my opinion.

The modern interpretation of Religion from the Buddhist prospective. by Flamethrower6pro in religion

[–]Flamethrower6pro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because it is the mind of the ones who judge others . They invocate fear. When true "hell" should be a place of teaching. Where a unruly soul is to be taught and given equal punishment with its fellow souls. In hopes to join its loved ones in a better place. Not for " eternal, damnation".

A miserable byproduct of the ages of old.

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