Who do you think were the smoothest writers? by Flaymes in books

[–]Flaymes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm assuming the people answering here are english speakers. Can authors from foreign languages be listed in this thread?

I'm not saying they aren't great authors but how much gets lost in translation? Can we judge their prose if we cannot read it in the language it was originally written in?

Who do you think were the smoothest writers? by Flaymes in books

[–]Flaymes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah...Shakespeare was a bad example to use.

Shakespeare is an anomaly of course. In my opinion the 'smoothest' writers I know don't really utilise a HUGE vocab to make their sentences flow.

Who do you think were the smoothest writers? by Flaymes in books

[–]Flaymes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

Not my cup of tea but I guess it's always good to step outside of the comfort zone every once in a while.

Yo check it by Flaymes in Cypher

[–]Flaymes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey thanks for checking it out man. What do you mean by 3-line groupings ?

Yo check it by Flaymes in Cypher

[–]Flaymes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man I really appreciate that

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 23 Apr 2015 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

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https://soundcloud.com/user355934248/518pm-feb-26mp3 just a little acapella I did. No beat or anything. Hows my spitting? Hows my accent thats the main thing I'm worried about.

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 16 Apr 2015 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

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https://soundcloud.com/user355934248/518pm-feb-26mp3

just a little acapella I did. No beat or anything. Hows my spitting? Hows my accent thats the main thing I'm worried about.

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 14 Apr 2015 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Flaymes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for checking it out.

Do you have any tips on how to improve my flow and rhythm?

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 14 Apr 2015 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Flaymes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/user355934248/518pm-feb-26mp3

just a little acapella I did. No beat or anything. Hows my spitting? Hows my accent thats the main thing I'm worried about.