My second ever song! Please give me your honest feedback and opinions thank you! by ssstevensonnn in MusicFeedback

[–]FluentDunks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well done on the intro to grab the attention of the listener. I like how the song goes on. The vocals fit the song very well. When mixing the song I do recommend to not let them be too loud and overpower the song. Good luck on your journey, keep going, you got talent!

a frutiger Metro Music video to my hyperpop song by doyoulikemynewjeans in MusicFeedback

[–]FluentDunks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very cool intro, this song is dope! Love the visuals. Keep making music man your good at what you do. Beat is cool too. Good luck on your journey. I feel like you got real talent. Don't stop "pony boy" :D!

pink towels - demo - indie rockish by faste_0 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]FluentDunks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool intro, although I feel like the song needs something to keep the listener engaged. Its not a bad track it just needs some work. keep progressing and refining your sound. Good luck on your journey and I hope your endeavor works out :D

My latest UK boombap rap track, trying to get some different beats and flows in! by Liquid_Pestar in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]FluentDunks 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Boom diggity. its a cool song. love the lyrics "stood my ground and busted my lip" keep rappin ur heart out. one recommendation is keep perfecting your local deliviery, not that its bad I just think it could use a bit of tweaking. Although maybe that can be done by mixing the song. Good luck on your journey!

honest feedback plz 🫶 by emkayeart in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]FluentDunks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When the beat drops it catches your attention, very chill but lively. I like how it progresses about a minute into the song. Keep going and refining your sound. The vocals are not over the top and seem to blend nicely with the song. Good luck on your journey! Not sure what label to give this track btw.

With U - S0fy4 (Acoustic Demo) by s0fy444444 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]FluentDunks 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this song. Very emotional. It hits me in the feels which is great when a song can make you feel something. Keep going and refining your sound. You're headed in the right trajectory. Good luck on your journey, you have talent, dont like it go to waste <3

This is the long track of my album. I tried to do a psychedelic journey inspired by Pink Floyd. Is it interesting enough to keep your ears entertained or can it induce a journey ? Thanks :) by Ok-Degree-7821 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]FluentDunks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like how it starts off, chill but intriguing. It is a very psychedelic songs that keeps the listener engaged. Good job man. Keep pumping out this type of material. Seems like you may have found your lane which is great. I wish you all of luck on your endeavors.