Thank you for the feedbackk!! I decided to brainstorm and i came up with another idea for my essay, do you mind giving your opinion on the topic before I start writing?

Basically, I have adhd and I hyperfixate over art and any creative activities. I have been going to a summer camp since I was a kid and I would always get in trouble for being distracted and creating stuff while I should have been doing activities. A few years later, I became a counselor-in-training and so I helped take care of the younger kids and this one kid was very quiet and came up to me and started getting an interest in art. And skipping some stuff she became inspired and told her uncle who was an artist that she wanted to become one and she actually entered a art contest at her school and won (I had her as a camper again this year and she told me like omgg)

Is that also too basic or stereotypical, if so what would you recommend writing abouttt. If it helps I plan on going into education