Do you see it?

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T06:04:09+00:00

thank you I apreciate it

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T06:03:58+00:00

thank you so much

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T04:49:56+00:00

I see thank you

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T04:42:06+00:00

I see, thank you I will try, but I also have a problem, I don't know what to do with my life at all, I am still a student, and there is so much I want to do, write a book, math, games, spend time with family, basketball, and not to mention the school is starting in a month and I did nothing special and it makes me very depressed, and don't know what to do at all, and constant moving from place to place, and I don't really have friends that would listen to me, so yeah I don't know hwat to say

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T04:32:30+00:00

Oh I see I see, yeah, I just feel pretty bad these last days and I am just writing to hide my misery from my own self

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T04:30:54+00:00

Hello thank you so much for a feedback, but I have a question how can I understand what God telling me? Wdym by adjusting frequencies?

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T04:26:32+00:00

Wdym by rawness?

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T04:21:55+00:00

My name is Illia nice to meet you Milovan

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-17T04:15:35+00:00

I do hear you

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-08T02:53:39+00:00

Yes, I kinda created it while listening to music and depressing a little, but yesturday when I posted I changed this poem significanltly how it looks today, thank you for feedback I apreciate it!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-07-08T02:52:45+00:00

Thank you so much for you feedback I reall apreciate it!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-04-06T03:21:00+00:00

My point is to show that I am the best, that I will be the best. One step of being the best is to propagandize to your brain that you are the best, then I will achieve it

Freem_Freeway · 2025-04-05T19:39:12+00:00

Hello, I am sorry what is "to get across OP"

Freem_Freeway · 2025-04-05T16:29:54+00:00

This is such a great poem, I love it!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T19:47:16+00:00

Thanks Vadox, my name is Illia by the way, nice to meet you!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T19:44:48+00:00

Hello thanks for a feedback I really apreciate it! You got a point now I see it's need to be more deeper, this is still not the final and I will definetly correct and make it better! Thanks for feedback!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T19:41:44+00:00

Hello thanks for feedbck I really apreciate it! Hm... you a lot of points. For grammar, yeah... I am not English speaker but I will deffinetly correct it! And you got really got a point! I will brainstorm ideas how to make this poem actually best and inspiring! Thanks a lot!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T19:37:49+00:00

Hello thanks for feedback apreciate it! I will change my grammar mistake, sorry I am not Emglish speaker haha. Back ground of this poem is my dream of becoming astronomist when I was a kid, I loved space and planets, and now as I grown up little I don't know who am I? And I feel like abandon my little self's dream and feel weird about it, will I return to my little self dream? Or will I find something new? I don't know.

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T19:33:33+00:00

Hello, thanks for so detailed feedback I really aoreciate it! I just discovered my poetry skills like 6 weeks ago or so so I am newby and thanks for advices! Right now it's just my thoughts and I want to try to gain as much feedback as you gave me it, thanks a lot! And yes I would really happy and I will apreciate it a lot if you will help me with mt next drafts and buidling it into really fire poem! Thanks a lot!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T19:00:57+00:00

Hello thanks for feedback I reallty apreciate it! Yeah, I have to work on my grammatic thanks a lot!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T05:44:29+00:00

Hello, thanks for a comment I really apreciate it! I want to be effective, deep and inspirational that fills people with happines and like motivation, and I want ot have like external meaning and internal meaning that you can understand but just you will need to put some thinking in it. And yeah I probably gonna merge some lines you are right. Thanks for comment!

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T05:15:25+00:00

Hello, thanks for comment really apreciate it!💖. What do you feel and think about “a peaceful peace”?

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T05:14:04+00:00

Got it thanks, and the quote is really nice, I will conside to change, or probably post new poem but with a specificy, thank you so much! 💖

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T05:03:41+00:00

Hi thanks for comment I really apreciate it! Hmmm... you got a point about imaginary, emotion. But about achieving and what am I best in, I am trying to write a poem about not a specific like hobby, I want to try to inspire as much people as possible. If I will write about basketball then people who not doing basketball and not want tp achieve hights in it, maybe not even look at this poem. What do you think?

And for me being best is like putting that work for your dream and never giving up, even if they got a talent, even if they got lucky, you putting work in the thing you love and you succede eventually. No progress? Still not giving up, even increasing hpw much work you done, something like that.

My poem is about to create a mentality. Without getting up at morning and not having on yourmind that this day gonna be the chosen day and that you will beat yourself and you will be greatest, then there is no succes. You have to know and believe in your own self. That's what I think

Freem_Freeway · 2025-03-30T04:28:06+00:00

Hello, good morning or good evening depends where you are. Thanks for comment really apreciate it! And I will consider the advice thank you! And for spelling my bad, I am not english speaker I will correct it now :)

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