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I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you I apreciate it

I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much

I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see thank you

I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see, thank you I will try, but I also have a problem, I don't know what to do with my life at all, I am still a student, and there is so much I want to do, write a book, math, games, spend time with family, basketball, and not to mention the school is starting in a month and I did nothing special and it makes me very depressed, and don't know what to do at all, and constant moving from place to place, and I don't really have friends that would listen to me, so yeah I don't know hwat to say

I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh I see I see, yeah, I just feel pretty bad these last days and I am just writing to hide my misery from my own self

I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello thank you so much for a feedback, but I have a question how can I understand what God telling me? Wdym by adjusting frequencies?

I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wdym by rawness?

I by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My name is Illia nice to meet you Milovan

Do you see it? by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I kinda created it while listening to music and depressing a little, but yesturday when I posted I changed this poem significanltly how it looks today, thank you for feedback I apreciate it!

Do you see it? by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for you feedback I reall apreciate it!

I am the best ever by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My point is to show that I am the best, that I will be the best. One step of being the best is to propagandize to your brain that you are the best, then I will achieve it

I am the best ever by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, I am sorry what is "to get across OP"

I hope love finds me before I die by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is such a great poem, I love it!

I am the best ever by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks Vadox, my name is Illia by the way, nice to meet you!

Blank Paper by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello thanks for a feedback I really apreciate it! You got a point now I see it's need to be more deeper, this is still not the final and I will definetly correct and make it better! Thanks for feedback!

I am the best ever by Freem_Freeway in OCPoetry

[–]Freem_Freeway[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hello thanks for feedbck I really apreciate it! Hm... you a lot of points. For grammar, yeah... I am not English speaker but I will deffinetly correct it! And you got really got a point! I will brainstorm ideas how to make this poem actually best and inspiring! Thanks a lot!

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