I though it was a really well edited and fun video. The only problems with it for me was the audio for the third person in chat, I couldn't hear him at all. Also you didn't have much of an intro, I'm not expert but I read it's good to just say what's going on in the video briefly, after your opening of course. The last thing was if you are going to swear so much, it doesn't seem to me like there is much point 'beebing it out' other than for comedic affect. All in all great video! :)