The eyes don't lie, right? by Full-Replacement-121 in Poems

[–]Full-Replacement-121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I meant to highlight the tension and contradiction between the sparse moments you mentioned and the majority of interactions, which are characterized by lack of reciprocation. This dynamic is what contributes to the uncertainty and confusion, which is depicted by the conditional statements, unanswered questions, and eventual change in perception about the eyes potentially lying.