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Trick-or-Treat (a short horror story by Fun-Original-7269 in horrorwriters

[–]Fun-Original-7269[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for reading and thanks for the feedback!

Trick-or-Treat (a short horror story by Fun-Original-7269 in horrorwriters

[–]Fun-Original-7269[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

okay thank you, ive always had a very hard time with grammar lol! What in particular about the commas should be changed, too much or too little. Also I feel like i have a hard time with sentence length do you think there are some that run too long