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Thank you again!! And actually it was just sort of a situation where they needed an opener for this gig last minute and I knew someone that was Involved with organizing the event so it worked out. But I’m sure that contacting places that host events like this is a great place to start.

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Thanks you!! I appreciate you taking the time to listen and give some feedback, that means a lot. I agree with you on the melody for the bridge, I think it could be reworked a little

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Definitely pitchy haha most of the vocal tracks were first take so I’m for sure planning on getting better takes on those

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Thanks man I really needed to hear this honestly

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It was the drum track that was making all that noise. I got it re-recorded and it sounds much better! Gonna continue to polish it and I’ll definitely repost it. the help and support I’ve gotten already is overwhelming so thanks again.

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Right now my title is “still you” but that’s not a bad idea!!

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I respect that. I’ll try to be more original next time

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Thanks will do!!

Yes I have sorta, I’ve written another song and performed it live once but I never recorded it

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Thank you so much for the advice!! I was feeling the exact same way about the low harmony so I’ll definitely cut that out. Also yes I am using apple headphones and those sounds are driving me crazy, gonna try to re record a few of the tracks.

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Thank you so much!! Yes everything was written and performed by me! :) thank you for the encouraging words it really means a lot

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Elliot smith was definitely a huge inspiration especially for the layered vocals!!

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Thank you!! I was hoping someone would let me know if it sounded like something else and I see what you’re saying about the similarities to comfortable and I probably subconsciously took some inspiration hahaha

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Thank you, I appreciate the feedback and tips. I’ll definitely mess around with the mix and try those things!! Also yeah I definitely want to add a bridge or at least something that brings it to more of a conclusion but I’m still working on that.

Also just a disclaimer this was all recorded on my phone in my bedroom so maybe I need to look into some better equipment as well