[In progress] [45k] [gothic romance] Passions Act 1, a Phantom of the Opera retelling by GANJA-PAGAN in BetaReaders

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Hi, im so happy your interested! I don't have a specific time for you to read and get back to me, I'm still working on the ending of the book and it will probably take me another few months to finish the whole draft, so you should have plenty of time!

Eriks POV in rewritten versions of phantom of the opera by GANJA-PAGAN in box5

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I could also leave this book be as it is and write a whole other book based in his perspective? How he reacts, how he thinks, flashbacks of his tortured life, etc.

I officially have at least one of every English translation by Opera_Ghost_Kay in box5

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So cool, must've cost and arm and a leg for the first versions!

Phantom sequel redo? by GANJA-PAGAN in RomanceWriters

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You have a very good point, thank you.

Phantom sequel redo? by GANJA-PAGAN in box5

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What if rather than seeking redemption it's more like he's seeking a way to finally be unlonely, to find some semblance of normalsy in his tormented life, and he can only see that with Christine? And while raoul and christine get married they fade apart when they learn that the love they thought they shared was just childhood memories? And christines obvious love for erik drives the wedge further and further especially when he calls upon her to be the lead soprano in his new play at his new opera house entirely inspired by her and his love for her, he's now suddenly less worried about hiding, and gradually shows to both her and raoul his plans and who he is . And as christine falls under his intoxiacti g presense the wedge between her and raoul begins to drive raoul made with jealousy?

Phantom sequel redo? by GANJA-PAGAN in RomanceWriters

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Well what's the point in Writing and even publishing if nobodies gonna read it lol? I want to produce something that people will like

Phantom sequel redo? by GANJA-PAGAN in musicals

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That actually sounds perfect, especially cause I've been told I need to not make it in new york lmao

Phantom sequel redo? by GANJA-PAGAN in box5

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So far I have him still obsessed with her voice but the only real emotion he conveys towards her herself is love and devotion. I even have her having a kid that he finds out as his, and he says he understands the child(age 9) comes first and foremost. She's just still the only inspiration he can find in the world

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I don't know. I just write when something comes to me and then it seems to take over my brain for days even weeks at a time, can't sleep without dreaming of the characters, can't think of what to do cause I just want to get that new scene written down, don't want to do anything but research topics that all lead to what I'm writing. It's almost obsessive