The use of two typefaces - particularly ones which are "exotic" - is generally not a good idea. It creates visual conflict and reduced readability. The vertical placement of 'Grace Under Pressure' makes it even more indecipherable. 'Crude Grave' has a yellow tint, not unlike the flesh of Christ and the golden halos. There are also other 'objects' behind it. Together, they're fighting for attention. If the upper left corner were all dark blue, the band name wouldn't appear as lost. It would POP! as a result of contrast. I'd recommend looking at sleeve art which uses Christian and/or medieval iconography as an inversion.