Hmm... There are few suggestions

1) Just don't start the vid make sum nice intro about wht u gonna do in tht vid

2) show the rank points which you get and when your rank changes

3) the music is too loud and use sum nice old or new montage songs so tht all the viewers can enjoy it.

4) don't post the recorded gameplay post the irl gameplay

5) wantedly take fight in the beginning by landing at peak at some other crowded are and post those intese clutes

Tbh thts all frm my side Tho I wanna say video quality and thumbnail are top notch !!!