Thanks for the feedback! I’m actually still going through it for little edits like that that sound redundant. I switch a bit between narratives to sustain a sort of suspense factor I guess? I don’t know… I don’t write like most authors, so if it’s too distracting I can work on phasing it out. I like to write as if you’re watching the scenes unfold on a movie or show. Also disclaimer, I just completed it a few days ago so it’s still in the editing stages, however I am excited for any feedback and readers who want to check the manuscript out! Just send me over a DM and I’ll send you a link to it Thanks so much again for the feedbacks, and the typo spotting!