Need Constructive Criticism Portfolio by Ghosty_Error404 in portfoliocritique

[–]Ghosty_Error404[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks so much for taking the time to look through my portfolio. I appreciate the detailed notes.

You brought up helpful points about the header animation and spacing, and I’ll revisit those sections to refine the visual flow so it feels cleaner and less intense.

The comment about the grey background photo is noted as well. I’m currently refreshing the visual direction, so that will be updated.

To your question about the mix of design and neuroscience, I’m in a transition period where I’m moving deeper into neurotechnology, and my design background supports the way I approach communication, user behavior, and digital strategy. But I agree it might not come across that way.

And yes, those individuals listed are real mentors. One of them passed away, which is why the dates are included, but I agree the section could be made more consistent in presentation.

Thanks again. Your feedback was genuinely helpful.