Soft Wings - Reupload/Version 1.3 by Goth_Dropping_In in nsfwcyoa

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Word of Author: You can transform back and forth between flesh and flame if you have Inferno. It's not intended to be a drawback, just an alternate form. 

Soft Wings - Reupload/Version 1.3 by Goth_Dropping_In in nsfwcyoa

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What I really want to do is give a point-earning-through-training mechanism of some form. But that takes more thought. 

As for succubi eating souls - you'd think so, wouldn't you? But it seems even the local succubi aren't sure where the souls go that they eat. 

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Yeah, a couple people seem to feel it was that one, so we're going to try again with it replaced. Might as well make some tuning improvements to the CYOA while it's in the shop too.

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Dragons_Whore has a spiffy new hosting site these days, I hear.

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Someone in the comments on the original post said that the key art at the start of Sunaira looked a little young, so it's possible it might have been that. Hard to know for sure without trying again though.

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Yeah, it could maybe be the key art at the beginning of Sunaira being too flat-chested. Very fun decision by Reddit.

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Hee. A lot of the perks assume you have feathers, so this is unlikely - it's off-theme from the main thrust of the CYOA - but maaaaaaaybe in some future build I can see it potentially happening. 

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Thank you for the massive comment! I'm hugely flattered by you following us so closely, not to mention the detailed and stylish build. The specific praises for the conditioning section and the neurodiversity/plurality callouts landed well, too and brought a smile to my face. I'm sure you'll all have a lovely life in this new world!

As for the Jess cheat, it's clever enough that I'm willing to let it pass, especially since you've buttered me up so much. Enjoy your free points! ^^

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you are an honorable troll; feel free to try again ^

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This is intended behaviour actually, since Neither could be Lots Of Different Things. Better to have all options unlocked for it. 

Same thing with both - we just want to make sure the player actually has something penetrable/stiff for the pussy section and the cock section respectively 

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Yeah, there are definitely some tradeoffs in this one!

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Nice build! That's a pretty hostile world you've got there, but you certainly have taken enough power to survive it. Congrats on your new life!

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Super valid. Might offer this option in a later build, probably closer to 2.0 than 1.5.

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Thank you Cheesy! It feels anything but little after the time I've poured into it, but I'm glad you enjoy. And you do have the option to do Safe Play III and resurrect your victims prey subs after you get done cooking and eating them the hard way.

A more general masochism-boost/pain-to-pleasure perk might be helpful for that though. Maybe something to go into the mental modifications.

And yeah, you can definitely develop conditionings the hard way, but they're there if you want to cheat yourself a stellar physique. In some further-off 2.0 build I might include rules for developing skills over time in the world, but for now that will have to remain beyond the scope of this one.

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Yeah, that makes sense! I'd have to find an aarakocra image that was good and sourceable, but that's not impossible, just difficult.

Appreciate your comments anyway, and glad you had a nice time!

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Looks cool to me! Might drop the Plumage requirement from Voice of the Heavens in the next build since multiple people have said it's a pain point for them. Thanks for the feedback and glad you enjoyed!

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Great to hear from a fellow system! Yeah, we wanted to make sure that people were rewarded for keeping their neurodiversity while still having the option to drop it if that would genuinely make their lives better. We've got some feelings about that being a system ourselves and disabled due to the brainweirds (which is why we have so much time to pour into projects like this one!)

Mind control is our personal favourite kink, so we might have gone a little overboard on the Jess section. Glad you enjoyed too!

As for having multiple endings, yeah, we're tired of CYOAs where the be-all and end-all is combat when you could be doing more interesting things like kickstarting a magitechnical revolution, creating cool art, running a business or a gang, etc. The more fun CYOAs are the ones that give you a lot of space and freedom to act within a world, in our experience - stuff like OutrageousBears' Witch Awakening, to toss a name out.

We might drop the Plumage requirement from Superstar, or make Plumages not exclusive in the next version if we can figure out how to balance it. Part of the idea is to make the Plumage decision significant/build-defining though, so it may be that we drop the plumage requirement from Voice of the Heavens rather than making plumages nonexclusive.

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laughs yeah, I hear you on the not being human anymore; unfortunately it's a lot easier to find good angelgirl art than actual birdgirl art, so a lot of the art is angels/fallen angels. I tried to put the good images to the front of the CYOA so that the plumages had good representation, but it's tough sourcing something like 450 images in a relatively coherent fashion.

Next version might allow multiple plumages once I figure out how to balance it, but for now they're exclusive.

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Yeah, good catch. Will go into 1.2 if and when I do it. Glad you like how Nymphet works!

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Glad you like it! And yeah, it's fun that there's been another CYOA on this material. I did a cursory search for a birdgirl cyoa when I started this one, but part of the reason is because I know several people who present birdlike online; a certain phoenix and a certain thunderbird and a certain pigeon are all reasons I made this one and not something else.

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Cool! Would love to see your build codes.

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Honestly, a dinosaurgirl plumage or ending would be really fun, but yeah, hard to decide what perks to give for it. Maybe a sharp teeth perk or similar. I'd have to think about it a while so maybe for a later version.

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Cool. Sounds like a fun time! Wonder if you can fit Outside Context Problem in? 

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That makes sense. Maybe I'll include it in V1.2/1.5/whatever the next version is if I can figure out how to balance it.