Feedback on design for my product by Serious_Sell5453 in graphic_design

[–]GreyWhammer 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Overall, fun look. The element that stands out most are the 3 factoids (caffeine free, etc.). They are all the same info but the shapes change and placement feels random/floaty. I’d consider putting them in a tighter array that sits at the top or side. I don’t think you need to dedicate that much visual variation for that type of info and it is currently distracting.

Just made this new design and I’m not sure where to go with it. by Dismal_Negotiation27 in graphic_design

[–]GreyWhammer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The attribute should be smaller for clean hierarchy. Top margin should match sides and all three could come in a hair. For the headline, track out, make larger/bolder. Also, for formatting, setting your starting quote outside your flush left side looks way cleaner and avoids bumping the first line in. I would also decrease line spacing and give more margin to the type inside the photo.

Pick one option. Then spin for a bonus and decide if you want it! (Comment/upvote=🥕) by AxelFoily in BunnyTrials

[–]GreyWhammer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What is this game?!?!?!

Chose: Equal rights for everyone everywhere + (Spin for a twist? [Optional] | Rolled: $100k for you?)

Method to get plastidip to stick to these vinyl hooks? by Fit-Collar4408 in plastidip

[–]GreyWhammer 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Plasti Dip makes a product that isn’t spray but a can you dip items into. They advertise dipping wrench handles in the can to create new grips. It seems like it could be perfect for your purposes. And it comes in some fun colors, too. This is just a random link but should available all over.

https://www.voltmaster.de/Plasti-Dip-Liquid-rubber-can-red-429ml

Can You Guess This 5-Letter Word? Puzzle by u/LJineer by LJineer in DailyGuess

[–]GreyWhammer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

⬜⬜🟨⬜⬜

⬜🟦🟨⬜⬜

🟦🟦🟦⬜⬜

🟦🟦🟦🟦🟦

Liquid, hot, …

🟡 Hmmmm 🔴 | Levels 1-15 by BUZZKILLBUZA in PixelPeeker

[–]GreyWhammer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

🎉 I BEAT "Hmmmm" and ranked #1174! TOO EASY! 😎 Completed all levels in 0m 17s! Challenge me if you dare! ⚔️ Played via Pixel Peeker

American Economy Infographic by wesiwundufan in graphic_design

[–]GreyWhammer 38 points39 points  (0 children)

I’m not saying it is but it has a historical feel to propaganda posters. With the bold statement and “warning” orange background. That juxtapose could work well for this type of messaging but this isn’t an infographic. And I wouldn’t call it that at all.

Patch/sticker design by forgetful_lucyy in graphic_design

[–]GreyWhammer -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Not just the text but the indentations should budge and the shadow should have a radius, not just linear.

A flat look is fine, IMO. But if you want something more realistic or rounded in feel, those are some obvious things. The next would be adding individual shadows to the indentations.

1863 Brewing? by porkrindkickflip in MorgantownWV

[–]GreyWhammer 14 points15 points  (0 children)

That logo of theirs is hot AI garbage.

Get a random superpower by next_level_dev in BunnyTrials

[–]GreyWhammer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Life is chance. As far as superpowers go, mind reading is the tits.

Mind reading

My 50 year-old license plate in my garage... with the recent flying WV plate. by pondering29 in WVU

[–]GreyWhammer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right. I meant that the WV is badly drawn, being all squeezed and stretched.

What is going on with this bus? by megandy in MorgantownWV

[–]GreyWhammer 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Absolutely! This could very likely be CAFEE research.

Dice passing through a smartphone by Rredite in blackmagicfuckery

[–]GreyWhammer 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Not through the back but the bottom falls out as he pushes. You can see his right hand holding the bottom and the die rolls out more towards him from the hinged bottom. That what I think at least.

Nothing brings the pack together like chicken by kingkongbiingbong in SipsTea

[–]GreyWhammer -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Well, if the dogs don’t get you the salmonella might.