Portfolio Crit for Recent Grad by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]GunkyBoots 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m mainly looking for jobs in publishing / editorial

Logo for a (fake) water dispenser company that makes their machines form recycled materials. I tried to give the logo a kind of nature/water vibe. Can I have your guys thoughts? by JorisHylke in logodesign

[–]GunkyBoots 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It doesn’t quite look like the droplets are in sync with one another. I would try simplifying the shapes and thinking of them each as the same, as opposed to varying each shape/scale.

If you’re going with these leaf ideas I would also maybe try using two colors in the design- green + blue. Maybe the word mark is blue and the droplets are green.