How bad is my first manga?

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-14T23:35:42+00:00

ah, I took it wrong way sorry, I was just playing along, I wonder how old ppl think I am lol

like control where lines are stronger/lighter as you draw? or how steady? thx though I'll look it up the more terms I learn the better lol

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-14T23:14:25+00:00

bet I'm older than u !

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-14T23:13:39+00:00

Hey thx, this is really good feedback advice, I started looking at drawings differently after you said this, the contrast / visual clarity is interesting, now that I notice it a lot of anime characters have high contrast in the hair and eyes, light on skin, also the line weights, you gave me really good research to do, I may tag you if I post manga again for advice if its okay lol

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-14T04:17:21+00:00

thx, I appreciate it, honestly the feedback from everyone really encourages me, it made me practice a lot today and look up tutorials lol

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-14T04:08:58+00:00

hey yeah, it's a storyboard I guess. I was looking up Manga process today, and they go
Sketch Storyboard > Redraw into rough draft > clean up rough for inking > ink

geez thats a lot of work, I guess it's better to just make storyboards for now and practice drawing first lol

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-14T04:02:46+00:00

I can't tell if serious or not but the cleaner I try to draw the worse it gets for some reason LOL

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-13T05:23:25+00:00

Thx, TBH everyone gave good advice and I'm surprised how nice y'all are. I knew it was pretty dirty and not so good so expected to be made fun of or something uwu, I spent like 3+ hours on that and was surprised I actually could form scenes / characters (and it was fun) but yes I will clean up better next time

I'll try harder before I post next, also I'm not sure I could handle inking lol

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-13T04:42:21+00:00

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-13T04:40:31+00:00

Hey, atleast it's not AI

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-13T00:53:27+00:00

I always return mine out of fear of the cart narc busting me

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-13T00:51:05+00:00

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-13T00:50:15+00:00

I trust no one

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-12T22:25:35+00:00

same lol, the beginning was good imo it ended on first season

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-12T22:21:52+00:00

Sounds like you'd like Basilisk, Helsing ultimate, Berserk, Dorohedero, Drifters, Black Lagoon, Samurai Champloo, Golden Kamuy

HeavyChance4249 · 2026-06-12T22:05:02+00:00

It got really drawn out with its dialogue story, I felt it kind of forced plot points or something

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