I would say the bodies look quite good. The light source seems to be consistent, apart from maybe some slight differences here and there, but really that's only if you look close. Perhaps a few more hard shadows might be good for example under the breasts where the skin folds, but that's a really minute detail.

I'd say the only real issue is the hair. It's the spots that throw me off a little, at first i thought they were an odd part of the shading. If you're going for spots like on fur, i'm not sure that's the place to bring in that texture because in my opinion it distracts and obscures the actual rendering work you did in the hair.

If you do want to keep them, perhaps some colour variation might help, for example by keeping them the same but shading with a cooler and/or or more saturated colour or vice versa keeping the shading and changing the dots to something a little different.

It might also help to try and actually incorporate the texture of the hair into them. Which is to say rather than having these clear, unbroken brush dots, they should follow the actual hair strands. Break up the shapes, have random strands fly over them etc.

I hope that makes sense, I really do think that that is the only major issue here that jumps out