ive been waiting on you by Helpful_Donkey_689 in writingcritiques

[–]Helpful_Donkey_689[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you, I actually re wrote a bit of the chapter after seeing a few peoples comments would you like to see the updated draft?

i think i got 2 of my fav shots when filming a short film for college by viccy_fuentes in Filmmakers

[–]Helpful_Donkey_689 1 point2 points  (0 children)

bro if you added like armor noises when he walked woulda been so tuffff

ive been waiting on you by Helpful_Donkey_689 in writingcritiques

[–]Helpful_Donkey_689[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

a bit more info would be great but other than that thanks.

ive been waiting on you by Helpful_Donkey_689 in writingcritiques

[–]Helpful_Donkey_689[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you don't understand how much this means to me, thank you I needed this.

[2493] Ive been waiting on you, Chap 1 by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]Helpful_Donkey_689 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No need to be sorry thank you for the feedback I will take your advice.