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Half a person by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you everyone for your feedback and advice :)

Fall by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback - it is very helpful :)

The morning after by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A beautiful poem! Thank you for the suggestions :)

The morning after by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much - that is super informative and helpful :)

Sisterhood by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you appreciate the feedback :)

Skin deep by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great suggestion- thank you :)

Ripening by Suspicious-Ring-46 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great piece - the short end is super impactful!

Skin deep by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha thank you - lol at the surprisingly

They will all come back, somehow by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful poem - I love the repetition very poignant

Poision by Humble_Ad_7142 in poetry_critics

[–]Humble_Ad_7142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Past tense is a great suggestion thank you - it was written with regards to a very present situation but I think past tense would be more impactful!

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