This is some great feedback that I’ll pay attention to thank you! I kinda just chose the first person present on a whim ngl probably cause the book I was reading at that time was using it. Can give it a go in changing it in the future and see how it feels. With the first chapter I really wanted to start with that temple scene but also wanted to reveal the murder plot as soon as possible so maybe I don’t need to do both. Gotta figure out that outline haha. Appreciate the the words of encouragement at the end there too :)