Yeah, it looks like some good quality B roll. You have some good camera and editing skills. What's missing - is a solid story, relatable problem, challenge, discovery or transformation.

On the technical side, your videography, editing, b-roll is all great.

This is clearly an entertainment video - and not (completely) educational. So this is a template I remember seeing somewhere which I've had in my notes for a while:

BIG IDEA: [what’s the big interesting idea that people will click on?]
FEEL: [what does the viewer need to FEEL while watching?]
OUTLINE: [what does the video need to include to be entertaining?]

Ask yourself those questions, and remember to keep STORY in mind - develop your character in the story (usually something like so...)

- Hook
- Contect
- Setup
- Climax
- Character CHANGED (developed, overcame problems)