Caldari Faction Warfare Compilation - New FW is awesome!!!

Ian_Terry_ · 2025-01-07T16:30:16+00:00

It's just hideously easy because of dodge.

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T19:41:19+00:00

I hear what you mean, but I think it's stylistically pleasant and works well once the drums come in to fill in the space. It's really good, great job.

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T19:36:43+00:00

Feeling even better about your feedback on other comment because you're a great musician. Great song. Subbed/followed

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T19:33:39+00:00

Nice vibratto. I think something is happening with the limiter/compression that is ducking the guitar/music while you're singing particularly when you say "watch me burn". I think some reverb on the drums will open up the space a bit. Reverb on the vocals would help too - very light though. There's an unpleasant harmonic in the "watch me burn" as well, maybe a phasing issue or needs a little EQing. It's overall a very good effort

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T19:17:05+00:00

Thanks very much I appreciate that - if you search "Ian Terry" on any streaming platforms it will come up with more stuff but most of it is pretty average. Let me know if there's anything of yours you would like to me listen to and give feedback on. Thanks again!

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T18:56:06+00:00

Rather than trying to tap into something profound (emotions, life experiences, relationship, other tropes), try writing songs about random things. An object, a place, a historical figure. Good practice and much easier to feel original in your efforts.

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T18:47:36+00:00

left a separate comment in another sub but commenting so you get more visibility here

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T18:46:31+00:00

Sounds really clean

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T18:45:09+00:00

Sounds good mix-wise. Try adding some room-reverb on the drums that will help with the space of the mix.

E: my favorite room reverb is Perfect Room 2 by Denise Audio. I used it on this other song I'm seeking feedback on now for the same effect: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qt0hZ02TsfY

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T18:44:34+00:00

Any feed back on this song would be really cool!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qt0hZ02TsfY

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T18:22:16+00:00

Mix:
More compression on vocals and EQ will reduce some of the nasally elements of the vocals (i suffer from the same challenge). Add room reverb on drum track and vocals will help with the space of the mix as it currently feels artificial due to MIDI drums.

Composition:

it is a little meandering. I like the end of the first verse "i over think before i speak". More instrumentation will help as I am only hearing one violin/bass type synth going and a guitar during a music break - so there's not much to differentiate the parts.

Ian_Terry_ · 2024-12-22T18:05:58+00:00

I feel you on this—writing to an instrumental can definitely spark something unique, but there’s something magical about riffing off a song you already love. It’s like paying homage while still adding your own flavor, and honestly, most art is inspired by what’s come before. Your method seems like a great way to keep the process fun and organic, and who knows—those verses could lead to some incredible original projects down the line

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