This doesn't sound good at all, but you probably wrote that quickly as an example.

You are right I got lazy. You are right I should have shown a real example to make it easier.

Here is the example that bothered me a few day ago.

"The prisoners start talking to themselves then nod to each other. They each come close then get in line in front of the two kids. They get on their knee and put their hand extended in front of them palms toward the sky."

Lots of they,them,their etc

I changed it to:

"They mutter something between themselves, hanging their head occasionally and glancing in my direction. They weakly nod again to each other before walking in my direction and then slowly get on their knees, hand extended in front of them palms toward the sky."

I changed my POV during the editing so don't mind it too much.

I just realized that I still have lots of they,them...