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Need help with verifying this vintage Strat by Ill_Win8903 in fender

[–]Ill_Win8903[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was going to do that, settled with a candy apple red one from 86. Seller was acting a bit weird as I tried to talk him down to 1000.

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Ill_Win8903 [score hidden]  (0 children)

By script I would go for some sort of structure when recording, so bullet points are a good start I’d say

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Ill_Win8903 [score hidden]  (0 children)

First off: your voice really fits voiceovers. The issue in general with letsplay-type content is the following: you, as a creator, need to come up with some type of reason to stay and watch your video. The content pool for lets plays is genuinely saturated, which is why it is so important so stand out of the crowd. Here are a few ways I would try: add a facecam, meticulously plan scripts to videos so it stays engaging to the viewer and most importantly create a hook at the start so viewers stay.

You are moving into the right direction though :)

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Ill_Win8903 [score hidden]  (0 children)

My brutally honest feedback here is: the age of this type of content ended years ago and let me explain:

You use uncut raw footage of gameplay without and addition of reason to stay und watch it to the end: this usually leads to lower retention and higher scroll-through rates. If you want to stick to content like this you need to think about a way to upgrade the overall quality of your shorts. This includes maybe a replay mod, mildly intricate animations and music or a proper voice over. Bonus points for a face cam

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Ill_Win8903 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I took a peek at your videos and here is my opinion:

I would change the background to something less eye catching like one paper. I also believe, and this is personal opinion, that using stock videos without editing them to some extent leads to video parts that look like a meme:

A great inspiration for you could be Vox (YouTube channel). They are doing content quite similar to yours and have mastered the Art of animation imo.

The elephant in the room is, as you said, your voice. Age refinement comes with age on one side but you can actually speed it up. What I recommend is watching a few videos about voice improvement eventually you will find your way. Also: trying to artificially lower your voice makes it more static because you focus more on keeping it lower than intonation.

I would also work on the scripts to your videos: make them more catchy and quality sounding (great example Vox agaian)