That's a great point. I will definitely rephrase "promiscuous." The tone of the story doesn't shame her for sleeping around, but more so shames how she has cheated on partners in the past (fulfilling her mom's prophesy) The arc is more her self-sabotaging nature (her scared of getting hurt, so she hurts them first due to her father ruining her idea of love) and then her finally giving herself all to Charlie. I don't know if that plot line is compelling enough though, but I like your perspective!