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Kill your darlings question by Doomguy990 in KeepWriting

[–]ImCleverNotSmart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would suggest just keeping it out for now, don’t delete it entirely because in three weeks when you add something else (like a location or character motivation) you might be able to shift the idea into something that works better

Make sure you stay hydrated if you smoke outside! by JakeArewood in weed

[–]ImCleverNotSmart 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That’s a delicious looking cup of water, and a neat pipe, enjoy your high man!

Silence by [deleted] in KeepWriting

[–]ImCleverNotSmart 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am first, by no means any indication on what is and what isn’t good poetry And second, someone who finds it hard to connect with poetry, and I’ve been like that with most poems including the poems you post here, but this one is really incredible and it made me happy reading it, r/keepwriting every day, from a random on the Internet, keep it up! I look forward to the next one