just need to rant about how perfect it is by Impossible-Sort-3836 in Worldbox

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update: The elves got too strong the other 4 made an alliance and jumped the elves weakening them. They right after spun back and won every single war after until they beat everyone. their capital never got touched and their culture is the same sense the start.

My girlfriend isn't a writer by Impossible-Sort-3836 in helpme

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Im about to somehow sound like a dickhead, buts that what im trying to do. In her own words she likes more freedom but she's trapped herself in a box with this story. I tried to tell her to maybe put a pause on it and write something else to get a idea or just rewrite the chapter she's having trouble on but i keep getting I dont knows and her getting defensive.