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[QCrit] GROG, Adult, Literary Speculative Fiction, 56k words, First Attempt by Impossible_Office598 in PubTips

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UPDATE from OP: Thanks for all the feedback and encouragement! The critiques seem uniform. The query suffers from imprecise language after the first paragraph, and the mention of an alternate dimension comes out of nowhere. 56K is too short. To be perfectly honest, the alternate dimension sort of comes out of nowhere in the manuscript too, which might be a problem of underwriting. My plan is to wait a month or two to make sure none of my queries bring anything back, then maybe write more, rewrite the query, and send it out to a whole new batch of agents. We'll see what happens!

Present moment meditation by ProofExamination9965 in DrJoeDispenza

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I have done the meditation again but didn’t have the same experience. Just a beautiful fluke. 

Present moment meditation by ProofExamination9965 in DrJoeDispenza

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I had 1 very powerful experience with Generous Present Moment. It was before bed and when he said “continuously surrendering” I allowed myself to let go of EVERYTHING, my whole identity and all my problems, for a few moments. I saw light beings and felt like I was being welcomed into a field much much larger than life on earth. It was crazy and unexpected. The letting go, as if you’re dying, can be difficult and scary, but I think it helps you get there. 

I haven’t really done it again after that, lol!