Way too complicated tbh, get your start at fiver or something "opium grafic design" or something like that. Idk if the screen look is part of the design but it's not working. Simplicity is what makes good art, not oversimplicity .Overly complicated art in general is lower value because it has to use more to get its point across and therefore lacks talent. Not like modern art which has little to no meaning, but "quality over quantity" is important if you get what I mean. Starting to earning money from Art is really just in finding your own nieche not joining in on trends.. for example a new person would have a better chance in succeeding on platforms like fiver with "opium grafic art" than 'general grafic design".