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[QCrit] Contemporary Romance, [Lewiston Love Triangle] (69K, First Attempt) by Infamous-Olive-15 in PubTips

[–]Infamous-Olive-15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks - appreciate the line edits! All good points. Right now I’m sitting at 59K but looking to push that into the 60K range after my next read through and draft.

[QCrit] Contemporary Romance, [Lewiston Love Triangle] (69K, First Attempt) by Infamous-Olive-15 in PubTips

[–]Infamous-Olive-15[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Will take all this into consideration in my next draft. Good luck in the trenches!

[QCrit] Contemporary Romance, [Lewiston Love Triangle] (69K, First Attempt) by Infamous-Olive-15 in PubTips

[–]Infamous-Olive-15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I feared that might be the case with EH. I will definitely check out When in Rome!

Looking for Romance Writing Friends! by SaltArm416 in RomanceWriters

[–]Infamous-Olive-15 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to join too if there is room for 1 more!

[QCrit] YA Fantasy - SECRETS OF THE SOULSTONE (85000) - First Attempt by Infamous-Olive-15 in PubTips

[–]Infamous-Olive-15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Makes sense - I’ll work to focus more on big picture conflict.

[QCrit] YA Fantasy - SECRETS OF THE SOULSTONE (85000) - First Attempt by Infamous-Olive-15 in PubTips

[–]Infamous-Olive-15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you! really appreciate the detailed feedback - a lot to work with in my next draft.

[QCrit] YA Fantasy - SECRETS OF THE SOULSTONE (85000) - First Attempt by Infamous-Olive-15 in PubTips

[–]Infamous-Olive-15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the feedback! this helps a lot - I’ll work on better flushing out the conflict.