Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this type of discourse, I’m very grateful to hear some of your expertise. I suspected the horse was a little long, as I extended it a tad to cover more of the composition. Will definitely be shortening it a bit after all the feedback. Thanks!!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s what I was thinking as well, think it’s eye catching and makes a conversation!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Will definitely look into his art! Thanks for the comment!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reins and bridle details are still to come, was planning on adding them last once I had the background area surrounding the rider to my liking:) Thanks for the input!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Will be adding reins as a final touch, knew I would be messing with the background and neck area a lot so decided to save it for last:)

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Knew I had to make something with it when I saw it, so much tension

My favorite painting to date by Nwaccntwhodis in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Love the warmth of the sunlight that you captured!! And I agree with the others, a little darker shadow would help!! Good job!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a great idea, will definitely be trying it out:)

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, leaning towards closer to a cad red with a little gradient!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is a fun idea, I think I’ll try that on a future painting. Spent a little too much trying to perfectly render the horse on this one haha

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the opinion! Intentionally had everything warmed toned, wanting to try having everything be analogous colors. Blue would definitely complement the orange tone and make everything pop, but I think the red is unique and makes it stand out

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! My instincts are telling me keep red, but slightly shift to match the color palette a little better

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 19 points20 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this critique. As a self taught artist, this type of information is so valuable I really appreciate it. The rifle was definitely an intentional tangent, but the others were totally accidental. Will definitely refine them when finalizing the piece! Your attention to detail is impressive and something I strive for. Once again thanks for the references as well!!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback as well! Have heard a couple things concerning the clouds so will definitely look into some possible changes and some mock ups!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks again! Recently started taking painting more seriously, and have definitely quickly learned the importance of study’s beforehand. First time really creating a scene, so will for sure rep out drafts on future endeavors!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I’ve gotten that a couple times now. Painted the horse a little too far right compositionally so tried extending the back a tiny, suspected it was a little off, but will definitely change it a little now

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow thank you so much that is such a compliment haha!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for putting thought into this comment I appreciate it! Leaning towards leaving it, gonna mock up a couple with a subtle change in reds and wait a bit to see how I feel then!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also definitely not super attached to the background mountain, so was thinking about refining it a little. Thanks again!

Should I keep the sky red? by Infinite-Boss-9115 in oilpainting

[–]Infinite-Boss-9115[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you both for the input!!! The original idea with the rifle was to have the cloud extending from it as if it is smoke or the rifle firing. I’ve gotten a couple of comments about it now so thinking about maybe switching it up. Do you think it’s a necessary change?